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The message of the video is slightly unclear. The imagery makes sense on its own, but certain sections like the drug use feels out of place, although turning that into imagery is good. The main issue is that the ideas don't fit together perfect, certain elements either contradict each other or feel out of place. The colours and themes need to be constructed properly and brought together, and as a plot device the drugs don't work, especially when it conveys the idea that drugs are a good thing. Keep the theme of video games and neon all throughout the video, maybe becoming more obvious and 'loud' by the end.